Пишем Body paragraph 2
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body paragraph 2 распишем второй аргумент в защиту нашего тезиса. Возьмем его из плана. Напоминаю, наш второй аргумент звучал так:
Dream job helps you stay motivated and work efficiently for a career growth. Раскроем его:
Furthermore, doing what you like keeps you focused
and thus contributes to a career development
(topic sentence).
In other words, the relationship between job satisfaction and efficiency is solid. People who love their jobs will easily succeed in their fields of work
and perform better than those who put salaries first
(supporting sentences).
For instance, Joanne Rowling, the famous writer best known for writing the Harry Potter fantasy series, have tried several jobs,
but the real success came only when she fully devoted herself to the writing career.
And after enduring years of ups and downs she became one of the most famous
and well-paid authors
(example).
Therefore, the benefits of jobs that keep you contented outweigh the downside of low wages in a long-term perspective
(conclusion).
Conclusion - Эту секцию мы разберем и напишем в следующем уроке.